托福写作素材整理：独立写作开头模板

1. 独立写作的基本概念

   独立写作是指在考试中，首先会给出一个具体的观点，之后你需要对这个观点结合自己的想法进行论述，写一篇议论文。独立写作的官方字数要求是300 words 以上，写作时间是30分钟。

   就考试内容而言，独立写作大家更为熟悉，是大家从初中就开始写的议论文。但是想要在短时间内用英文对一个观点在有限字数内进行深入地论述很不容易。但相较于GRE写作而言，托福独立写作的难度低了不少，不需要逻辑性非常强的论述过程。

   ETS对托福独立写作评分标准也有说明，但是依旧处于模棱两可的状态。个人总结下来，无外乎包括以下几个部分：首先，需要严谨的扣题；其次，需要清晰的行文逻辑和文章发展顺序；还有，需要良好的语言表达能力和丰富的句法多样性。如果能做到以上几点，独立写作高分就很容易了。

2. 托福独立写作经典开头模板
3. 标准写法：直接表明立场开门见山

题目：

Businesses are as likely as are governments to establish large bureaucracies, but bureaucracy is far more damaging to a business than it is to a government.

模板：

Contrary to the statement’s premise, my view is that businesses are less likely than government to establish large bureaucracies, because businesses know that they are more vulnerable than government to damage resulting from bureaucratic inefficiencies. My position is well supported by common sense and by observation.

2. 创意写法：引用谚语名言联系现实

题目：

As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.

模板：

As a saying goes, “God helps those help themselves”, which is true in most cases. But as far as the large numbers of laid-off workers caused by the technological and market changes are concerned, I believe the government and the business certainly have an unshakable responsibility to take.

3. 稳妥写法：先复述原题再引出观点

题目：

"We shape our buildings and afterwards our buildings shape us.”

模板：

I believe this statement should be interpreted broadly—to mean that we are influenced by the exterior shape of buildings, as well as by the arrangement of multiple buildings and by a building’s various architectural and aesthetic elements. While I doubt that buildings determine our character or basic personality traits, I agree that they can greatly influence our attitudes, moods, and even life styles.

4. 设问写法：自问自答给出立场态度

题目：

"As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.”

模板：

As technology and changing social needs render more and more jobs obsolete, who is responsible for helping displaced workers adjust? While individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding work, both industry and government have some obligation to provide them the means of doing so.