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Is modern technology creating a single world culture?
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
写作思路展开结构分析
立场:不同意。确实技术的进步使得各个文化之间的差异减少了。(可以举出很多例子) 但是有一些文化差异是不会改变的。(也可以举出很多例子) 结论:技术将使文化间的差异变少,却不可能形成一个single world culture。
本话题高分范文赏析
Through modern technology such as TV, telephone, and the Internet, it has become easier for people from different cultures to communicate. In a sense the world has become a smaller place. However, it is questionable if technology is creating a single world culture, because, even though a cultural exchange is taking place, accessibility of this technology is still very limited, and, more importantly, people have come to value the differences inherent in their cultures.
People around the world are taking advantage of the opportunities, presented by modern technology, to learn about other cultures. Not only foreign movies, music, and books communicate with the locals, but the different cultural values do, which are readily available on DVD, CD and via the Internet. Similarly, TV broadcasts fashions across the world and a new style of dress will likely catch on quickly in different parts of the globe. People adopt foreign things they like and make them their own. In this sense cultural assimilation is taking place.
However, while some societies and their cultures are technologically advanced and thus connected with other parts of the world, the majority of the world's population lives largely isolated. Such isolation is the result of limited technological resources, which in turn is, generally, related to poverty. For example, nearly the entire continent of Africa is impoverished. Its people have few means to learn about other cultures, and even if they did they would have little use for Western culture, which to a great extent is a consumer culture. They are also extremely limited in the ways they can educate people from other parts of the world about their cultures.
Finally, people who are learning about foreign cultures generally come to appreciate and accept the differences between other cultures and their own. They recognize the value of variety. The enjoyment they derive from experiencing foreign languages, dances, songs, visual and culinary arts, also allows them to see the value in their own cultures' achievements. Therefore, cultural exchange does not necessarily result in the melting of many cultures into one.
写作技巧:使用因果论证所需的逻辑关系表达
逻辑关系词有:
1)表示原因:because,as,since,dueto,owingto….
2)表示结果:hence(因此),thus(因此),therefore(因此),Asaconsequence,…(作为结果),Accordingly..(相应的)Asaresult…(作为结果),Consequently…(作为结果),so…that...
逻辑关系词句有:
1)Thephenomenonmainlystemsfromthefactthat…
2)原因accountsmainlyfor/areaccountablefor结果
3)原因beresponsiblefor结果
4)原因contributespartlyto结果
因果论证的重点不仅是找到论据和结论来支持你的论点,而且还有明确的单词和转折句作为联系。如果你在这方面的能力很弱,小编建议你不仅可以看到更多的议论文写作技巧,还可以背诵更多的雅思写作模型,根据模型给出的逻辑安排他们的作文,然后写几次,努力达到另一个满意的标准。