不少考生都说托福作文真的很难的，但是其实，只要大家认真备考了，还是可以考取不错的分数的。下面小编送给大家一篇托福真题作文范文：工作到底为了什么。
托福写作考些什么?
托福写作包括两部分，需在50分钟的时间内完成。
第一部分是综合写作，以阅读和听力材料为基础的写作试题，写作时间为20分钟。考生首先需要阅读一篇学术篇章，阅读的时间是3分钟。然后文章隐去，考生需要听一段大约为2分钟左右的与阅读主题相关的演讲。之后考生需要针对阅读和演讲中的观点作文，总结并说明演讲的内容与阅读中观点的关系，在20分钟的时间内完成一篇150~225字的文章。
第二部分是独立写作，需要考生根据自己的知识和经验陈述、解释并支持对待某一问题的某个看法，考查综合语言技能的作文题目的评分以回答的质量、完整性和准确性为依据。在30分钟内完成一篇300字以上的文章。
一般情况下如果你的时间充裕，小编建议大家能多写尽量多写，并不是网上有些人说的多写怕出错，小编认为的多写并不是没话找话，这里讲的多写是要考生让文章更加完整的情况下去填充内容，让写作文章更加的丰富。
本话题高分范文赏析
One of the most overlooked reasons why people work is to help other people. Government officials, social and charity workers, and religious organizations, and others all work not only for their own salaries, but also work for the common good. They labor for others because of their moral convictions, for reasons of personalreciprocity, and because they want to make society more stable, thereby benefiting themselves and others. Some of the most famous charity workers in the world have been affiliated with religious groups. For instance, many of the foreigners living in the poor regions of Africa are doctors, teachers, and other professionals who are paid by religious organizations to help the poor, sick, and needy people there. These professionals could make much more money if they worked in rich countries. They have chosen to help poor people because they believe their religion tells them to help people who cannot help themselves. They are working for others for moral or religious reasons. Some people work for other people because at some time in their lives, someone else has helped them. Many teachers can tell stories about a particular teacher who changed their lives. The gift a great teacher gave to them inspired them to become teachers themselves. Likewise, many people become doctors because a doctor saved one of their family member's life and they felt like they owed a debt of gratitude that money could not repay. To such people, the motivation for working is not the paycheck at the end of the month, but the smile on a child's face when they read their first book, or the look of joy on new parents' faces when they see their healthy newborn baby. Finally, some people work for others because they believe that society is only safe and stable when all of its members are happy. These people include good government officials who try to make policies that benefit the poorer classes of society. They know that only by making policies that help poor people live richer, happier lives can they lower crime, sickness, and poverty rates, and make society safer and happier for all citizens.
托福写作误区有哪些：
1.是不是准备几个名人的例子就可以了？
并不是，首先要切题，如果题目说的对象是4-7岁的孩子，你举个乔布斯的例子，就算偏题了。
其次，举例子的重点是要先描述一个例子，然后表达你自己对于这个例子的看法和分析。并不要求使用名人、或者非常复杂的例子，阅卷人并不会按照论据的复杂性来看文章。
还有例子的表达不要啰嗦，不要像写日记一样，而且要地道。
所以，名人的例子或者个人的例子都可以，只要切题和语言表达地道就行。还要重点强调，在例子前面要有展开，先把道理论述清楚再举例子，不能主题句写完就写例子，没有展开分数就不会有good，具体可以参考fair等级的描述。
2.托福写作多写就可以拿到高分
很多学生会疑惑自己文章练习挺多的了，但是为什么分数却一直上不去？
写作不能闭门造车。首先，写作要有大量的输入，才能输出，所以写之前要有归纳。
建议大家分类准备话题语料和表达，还有分类话题范文，想让大家先记一些素材，仿写一下范文，这样大家在输出的时候才会有话写，不断改进提高。
其次，写完之后要总结。如果一味输出，不去找自己的问题，不去改进，也很难得到提升。所以写完之后一定要让老师修改，不断发现问题，总结问题，这样才能事半功倍。
