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托福写作范文分享:儿童的成长环境 托福写作丢分点

2023-10-23 11:16分类:托福阅读:33 分享
文章导语

今天小编为考生带来了托福写作范文学习:儿童的成长环境。考生们快和小编一起看看范文里都是怎么写的吧。

Big city or countryside, which is better for children to grow up in?It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

高分范文赏析

Having grown up in the country myself, I can say without a doubt that I want my own children to grow up in the city. Life in the city is incomparably better for children than life in the country. The city has better schools,health care, jobs, and more exposure to the outside world. The two most important things in any child's life are health and education. In the country,if children get sick, there are no good hospitals to take them to. Families are often so poor that they can't afford to send all of their children to school, and the schools are usually of low quality anyway. In the cities, on the other hand, health care facilities and schools are of excellent quality.

Children from cities also have a much higher chance of getting into excellent universities. City universities have large numbers of spaces reserved for local residents while they have relatively fewer spaces for students from the countryside. If I want my child to have a good chance of getting into a good university, I would raise them in a city.

City salaries are significantly higher than salaries in the country. Jobs in the city are also much easier, on average, than jobs in the country. A worker in the country might spend 14 hours a day laboring outdoors in the fields and make much less money per month than the city worker who typically works only eight hours a day. I want my child to grow up and get a good, high-paying job. A better place to find those jobs is in a city.

Finally, I want my children to grow up into a world that is larger than just their immediate surroundings. In a city they will have a chance to meet people from all over the country and all over the world. They will have chances to absorb history and culture from the cities parks, theatres, and museums. Only in the city will they have the chance to be truly global citizens.

托福写作考生需注意哪些丢分点?

一:中式思想

因为受到地域影响,大陆考生从小所接受的都是中式思想的教育,但是当到了考生学习英文时,是难以马上就把中文思想给纠正过来。中式思想以及西式思想在表达上都会有很大的差异存在。此过错同样是大家在考试时易犯的,如此还要如何去防止这种状况的发作呢?其中好是在平常操练的时分要多堆集地道的英文表达方式,不断的操练让你自己逐步的习惯西式思想和表达方式,只要这样才能让你的托福作文取得高分。

二:用词的过错

中英文的表达同样是不相同,通常相同的一个词,在中文中相同的字还可以代表多种意义,但是在英文里相同一个意思在不同的语境中体现出是要通过不一样的词汇来出现的,因此在托福写作时,用词必定要准。平日再去更多的堆集词汇的一起,同时可以按照语句来记忆作用会比较好。这儿举一个简单的比如:affect与shock相同都是影响的意义,前者只是影响,没有幅度上的不同,但后者就是很剧烈的影响。

 

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