谈及托福独立写作,一直有学生苦不堪言,无从下手,下面小编就简要分享下托福写作高分句子表达的方法。
I 准确的句子表达
句型分析
英语的句型包括以下几种,简单句、复合句、并列句、并列复合句等。在新托福写作中,一般使用复合句,辅以并列句和并列复合句,当然肯定要有简单句,做到长短句相结合。下面摘抄几个句子给大家认识并分析一下复合句和并列复合句。
a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.
这句话是一个复合句,由even though引导的让步状语从句。
b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.
这句话中是一个复合句。with介词结构中,有一个that引导的同位语从句对result进行解释说明。
c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.
上句话是一个并列复杂句。and 连接了两个句子,是一个并列句;because引导的原因状语从句。
d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.
这句话同样是并列复杂句。由and连接两个句子,成为并列句,再一个which引导的定语从句。
II 高分表达
除了在句式上长短句相结合准确表达外,三立在线建议新托福考生要使用一些特殊的句式,以使句型多样化。句型多样化也是作文得到高分的条件之一。除了我们之前经常提到的高分句式,如倒装句、强调句、状语前置、插入语等,笔者还提出另外一个句式的多样变化,即主语多样化。下面笔者将列举几个句子概括介绍前面四种句型,而重点分析主语多样化。
正常句: Luck only works in extreme cases.
倒装句: Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定词位于句首的倒装。)
正常句: The internet provides people access to the latest information.
强调句: It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (强调the internet)
正常句: The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.
状语前置句: Along with the accelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.
正常句: However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.
插入语: New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (连词however做插入语)
托福写作怎么拿高分?
1、内容的完整性和准确性;一般来说,试卷上的信息都是三个方面,一是要看考生有没有完整地提炼出演讲中的重要信息(用自己的语言),以及与试卷中的内容进行有效的匹配。若遗漏了一些重要的知识,则会被扣分;仅就阅读材料的意见进行写作,得分。
2、论文的结构、词汇、文法的运用是否恰当。要想得到好的作文,必须要有条理、有条理、有条理、有条理、有条理、用词得体的能力,考生要保证自己能正确地表达自己在课堂上所说的观点和自己所看到的观点之间的关系,只要不有太大的表示性错误,都不会对你的作文造成太大的影响。
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