托福写作中常常会犯一些明显的错误。考生们要谨记,切不可掉以轻心。为了帮助大家改掉这些错误,减少掉分的内容,下面是小编给大家整理收集的托福写作考试中常易犯的错误,供大家参考,希望可以帮到大家!
1、there be 句型误用
There are a great many parents require their children to learning music and art since they are at the age of five.
There are a large number of students spend more than ten hours a day on learning English in CAU.
There be 句型是我们在写作中经常用的一种句型,可惜这种巨型很多考生并不能真正掌握。在there be后面如果要加动词,千万不要出现例句所犯的错误,要时刻记得be动词后面应该加的是ing形式。
2、用词不当
学生们在托福写作中或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题,但是要注意的是一些较较基本的错误是不能犯的。
In the show,if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly,they will get five hundreds thousand U。S。 dollars as a prize。
problems应改为questions
3、名词单复数错误
A great many student would benefit from the investment on improving school.
Few parent would like to permit their child to make any mistake.
Environmental problem are beyond the ability of individual.
上面这三句话中,都出现了共同的错误,就是本来应该是复数的名词却写成了单数形式。
4、主谓不一致错误
A quantity of people concerns about how to solve the severe problem of air contamination.
Restricted by methods, students has to be influenced by their teachers, even though the teachers are not outstanding.
新托福写作不同于汉语,汉语中的谓语动词是不会有任何变化的。比如我说一个人在吃饭和一万个人在吃饭,吃就是吃,不会有吃s和吃之分。可是在英语中,谓语动词要根据主语的单复数情况进行变化。在上面的两个例句中,主语都是复数,而谓语动词却选择了单三形式,显然是不正确的。
5、时态错误
In the past, the major way for young people to learn knowledge is attending classes.
When I study in college, I have no choice but to spend more than 10 hours a day on academic study.
托福写作中除了主谓一致之外,英语另一个我们汉语不具有的特点就是时态问题。过去时,过去完成时,一般现在时,将来时,正在进行时。各种各样的时态也是我们要数量掌握的。在上面的例句中,所犯错误即为将过去时的动词写成了一般现在时。
6、拼写错误
还请备战托福考试的同学们注意,这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的误打,而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。
In conclusion,issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one,requiring subjective judgement,consequently,there are no easy or certain answers。
judgement应改为judgment
7、乱用大词
First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.
这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题:
1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职,因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;
2)although和but是不能连用的;
3)指代不明,they不知道是指代前面的什么;
8、表达中式
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.
该句的表达过于中式化。
9、表意重复
They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.
前面已经提到了朋友,后面又提到朋友。
The show is so compelling but attractive.
compelling和attractive是同义词,所以这里这么写就让人不明白。
10、固定用法错误
To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.
To some extends应改为To some extent
11、例证夸张
For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.
虽然善意的谎言是必要的,但是其功效显然没有这么大。
12、成分多余
According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.
该句中的shows that是多余的成分。
13、词性误用
No one can negative the importance of money.
Family members play significance role in our journey s of success.
托福写作技巧提到词性误用同样是托福考生常犯的一种错误,因为英语单词的名词形式,形容词形式,副词形式很多时候是非常相近的,如果我们对语法掌握或者对于单词本身掌握不够扎实的话,很容易出这种错误。